Good point about getting less of Harry’s inner narrative—I’d been thinking I was feeling less connected to the story and wondering why because the prose seemed to be at least as good as it’s been, and probably better.
“Less inner narrative” gives me hope for a plot payoff, and it’s much more subtle than a character explaining a plan to other characters without the details being given to the reader until the plan is acted on.
Good point about getting less of Harry’s inner narrative—I’d been thinking I was feeling less connected to the story and wondering why because the prose seemed to be at least as good as it’s been, and probably better.
“Less inner narrative” gives me hope for a plot payoff, and it’s much more subtle than a character explaining a plan to other characters without the details being given to the reader until the plan is acted on.