Thank you. It is something I can use for improvement.
Can you point at the flaws? I can see that the structure of sentences is overcomplicated, but I don’t know how it feels to native English speakers. Foreigner? Dork? Grammar Illiterate? I appreciate any feedback. Thanks.
Actually, a bit of all three. The one you can control the most is probably “dork”, which unpacks as “someone with complex ideas who is too impatient/show-offy to explain their idiosyncratic jargon”.
I’m a native English speaker, and I know that I still frequently sound “dorky” in that sense when I try to be too succinct.
Also, interesting thing happens if by the whim of the creator computer is given a goal of tiling universe with most common still life in it and universe is possibly infinite.
Respectfully, I don’t know what this sentence means. In particular, I don’t know what “most common still life” meant. That made it difficult to decipher the rest of the comment.
ETA: Thanks to the comment below, I understand a little better, but now I’m not sure what motivates invoking the possibility of other agents, given that the discussion was about proving Friendliness.
It wasn’t me, but I suspect the poor grammar didn’t help. It makes it hard to understand what you were getting at.
Thank you. It is something I can use for improvement.
Can you point at the flaws? I can see that the structure of sentences is overcomplicated, but I don’t know how it feels to native English speakers. Foreigner? Dork? Grammar Illiterate? I appreciate any feedback. Thanks.
Actually, a bit of all three. The one you can control the most is probably “dork”, which unpacks as “someone with complex ideas who is too impatient/show-offy to explain their idiosyncratic jargon”.
I’m a native English speaker, and I know that I still frequently sound “dorky” in that sense when I try to be too succinct.
It is valuable information, thanks. I underestimated relative weight of communication style in the feedback I got.
Respectfully, I don’t know what this sentence means. In particular, I don’t know what “most common still life” meant. That made it difficult to decipher the rest of the comment.
ETA: Thanks to the comment below, I understand a little better, but now I’m not sure what motivates invoking the possibility of other agents, given that the discussion was about proving Friendliness.
In a cellular automaton, a still life is a pattern of cells which stays unchanged after each iteration.