Please, please try to make your writing more succinct (assuming the next post, which has the actual important bits in it, is as long and rambling as these two). I criticised your style heavily in the last post because I want to be able to get your ideas without having to hunt for them.
Please, please try to make your writing more succinct (assuming the next post, which has the actual important bits in it, is as long and rambling as these two). I criticised your style heavily in the last post because I want to be able to get your ideas without having to hunt for them.