For me (but perhaps not for waveman), there’s a general attitude throughout the essay of assuming that I know the specific connotation of the Hogwarts houses, which seems different than the stereotypes in my head. The essay doesn’t read like how I might explain this system to a friend, but more to someone who’s already familiar with these ideas. Maybe more examples would also help.
For me (but perhaps not for waveman), there’s a general attitude throughout the essay of assuming that I know the specific connotation of the Hogwarts houses, which seems different than the stereotypes in my head. The essay doesn’t read like how I might explain this system to a friend, but more to someone who’s already familiar with these ideas. Maybe more examples would also help.