Could you give actionable feedback?
I would run this post (and future posts) past an editor/proofreader who is strongly familiar with the English language prior to posting.
Thank you. I didn’t expect that. The feedback on this I got earlier wouldn’t have suggested it.
I agree that it would be improved by editing by, or based on feedback from, someone with stronger English writing skills, I didn’t really mind it that much myself.
I would run this post (and future posts) past an editor/proofreader who is strongly familiar with the English language prior to posting.
Thank you. I didn’t expect that. The feedback on this I got earlier wouldn’t have suggested it.
I agree that it would be improved by editing by, or based on feedback from, someone with stronger English writing skills, I didn’t really mind it that much myself.