Just a general comment on style: I think this article would be much easier to parse if you included different headings, sections, etc. Normally when I approach writing here in LessWrong I scroll slowly to the bottom, do some diagonal reading and try to get a quick impression about the contents and whether the article is worth reading. My impression is that most people will ignore articles that are big uninterrupted long chunks of text like this one
Just a general comment on style: I think this article would be much easier to parse if you included different headings, sections, etc. Normally when I approach writing here in LessWrong I scroll slowly to the bottom, do some diagonal reading and try to get a quick impression about the contents and whether the article is worth reading. My impression is that most people will ignore articles that are big uninterrupted long chunks of text like this one
Thanks for the feedback. I’ve added some headers to break it up.