The layout of the introductory text blurb below the pictures could be improved. Readers (secret meaning: me) are in danger of skipping to the clear heading-text of “We Can Do Better” and totally missing the introduction. My first thing I’d try would be to move the “What if?” box up a little (aligning text with text, rather than with the top of the box), and then take the following text from below it and put it all in the right-hand column, making sure that “We Can Do Better” is still clearly visible on the bottom of most monitors without having to scroll down.
Also, “We at CFAR see the discovery of these “cognitive biases,” or systematic thinking errors,” should be “We at CFAR see the discovery of these systematic thinking errors, or “cognitive biases”.”
The layout of the introductory text blurb below the pictures could be improved. Readers (secret meaning: me) are in danger of skipping to the clear heading-text of “We Can Do Better” and totally missing the introduction. My first thing I’d try would be to move the “What if?” box up a little (aligning text with text, rather than with the top of the box), and then take the following text from below it and put it all in the right-hand column, making sure that “We Can Do Better” is still clearly visible on the bottom of most monitors without having to scroll down.
Also, “We at CFAR see the discovery of these “cognitive biases,” or systematic thinking errors,” should be “We at CFAR see the discovery of these systematic thinking errors, or “cognitive biases”.”