I think this post would have been stronger without any use of the term fascism, and then you also could have left out the term “rakes.”
The title could be “Permissiveness and Harm” or something like that. You only even use the titular terms a few times, more than three quarters of the way through the article.
I think this post would have been stronger without any use of the term fascism, and then you also could have left out the term “rakes.”
The title could be “Permissiveness and Harm” or something like that. You only even use the titular terms a few times, more than three quarters of the way through the article.