Thanks for writing this!
Typos & edit suggestions, for the post at dynomight.net, not in order: (feel free to ignore)
Stephan Guyunet → Stephan GuyenetThe fourth mechanism is saturated fat free radicals. → saturated fat causing / producing free radicals (?)When humans build complex systems we modularize, → systems, we modularizeThat might suggest that that seed oils → That might suggest that seed oilsHad cholesterol that looked slightly better by most measures → Had cholesterol that looked slightly better by most measures.I don’t see this as a conclusive, → I don’t see this as a conclusive argument,the experimental evidence suggest → the experimental evidence suggestsrich in lionleic acid. → linoleicThese “inconvenient” results were mostly ignored until 43 years later, Ramsden et al. (2016) came around → later, when Ramsdenmeaning the average subject was only in the trial for only one year. → for one yearThere’s a whole sub-debate debate about → sub-debate aboutdespite eating lots saturated-fat-rich croissants or whatever. → lots oflooked at trials of trials that increased linoleic acid or omega-6 fats → looked at trials thatmetabolism of lionoleic acid → linoleiclow levels of LA consumption (Liou and Innis (2009). → (missing closing parenthesis)with a long term trend of people → long-termThe leftmost part of the plot is an estimate for men born in 1882 in 1932 (when they were 50) → for men born in 1882 living in 1932But the Citadel, if anything is decreasing → But for the Citadel, if anything BMI is decreasinghunter-gathers → hunter-gatherersf some mechanism turned out to part of a larger, more complicated story. → turned out to be part
Stephan Guyunet → Stephan Guyenet
The fourth mechanism is saturated fat free radicals. → saturated fat causing / producing free radicals (?)
When humans build complex systems we modularize, → systems, we modularize
That might suggest that that seed oils → That might suggest that seed oils
Had cholesterol that looked slightly better by most measures → Had cholesterol that looked slightly better by most measures.
I don’t see this as a conclusive, → I don’t see this as a conclusive argument,
the experimental evidence suggest → the experimental evidence suggests
rich in lionleic acid. → linoleic
These “inconvenient” results were mostly ignored until 43 years later, Ramsden et al. (2016) came around → later, when Ramsden
meaning the average subject was only in the trial for only one year. → for one year
There’s a whole sub-debate debate about → sub-debate about
despite eating lots saturated-fat-rich croissants or whatever. → lots of
looked at trials of trials that increased linoleic acid or omega-6 fats → looked at trials that
metabolism of lionoleic acid → linoleic
low levels of LA consumption (Liou and Innis (2009). → (missing closing parenthesis)
with a long term trend of people → long-term
The leftmost part of the plot is an estimate for men born in 1882 in 1932 (when they were 50) → for men born in 1882 living in 1932
But the Citadel, if anything is decreasing → But for the Citadel, if anything BMI is decreasing
hunter-gathers → hunter-gatherers
f some mechanism turned out to part of a larger, more complicated story. → turned out to be part
Many thanks! All fixed (except one that I prefer the old way.)
Thanks for writing this!
Typos & edit suggestions, for the post at dynomight.net, not in order: (feel free to ignore)
Many thanks! All fixed (except one that I prefer the old way.)