The chapter 122 in itself was good, I liked it, but I feel a bit disappointed that it’s the end of the whole hpmor.
Not to be unfairly critical, it’s still a very great story and many thanks to Eliezer for writing it, but… there are way too many remaining unanswered questions, unfinished business, … to be the complete end. It feels more like “end of season 1, see season 2 for the next” than “and now it’s over”.
First, I would really have liked a “something to protect” about Harry’s parents.
But mostly, there are lots of unanswered questions : how does magic work ? What destroyed Atlantis ? Where do the Deadly Hallows and the Stone come from ? What is the thing threatening to destroy the world ? What exactly are the effects of all the transformations on Hermione ?
And many plots arcs not finished : will Hermione managed to destroy the dementors, and with which consequences ? How will the political landscape reshape, but in UK and worldwide ? How will Harry manage to find a safe way to save the muggles too ? How will Hogwarts evolved ? How will Harry manage the Elder Wand ?
Isn’t it a little out of character for Harry to blithely assume that Hermione can’t possibly die in her dementor mission? He doesn’t even know how Horcrux 2.0 works—is there any good reason to think that the Horcrux will preserve your life if you deliberately fuel your magic with your life to kill dementors? (It’s basically just a body-hopping spell, not a life-preservation spell.) Would a horcrux restore to Harry the life and magic he used to revive Hermione?
It just seems suspiciously out of character that Harry has now suddenly turned into an optimist with regard to Hermione’s survival. He even says to himself he would never let her risk the mission if he thought it was actually dangerous, which means that he apparently actually fully buys into her immortality.
It will be tragic for Harry if she is dead again, for real, next week. Not because death is tragic per se, but because it will utterly blindside him.
Presumably they would test Hermione out on a single dementor first. Harry made that point about Voldemort testing horcruxes, so presumably he would do that as well. Also, didn’t Voldemort write down the directions for resurrecting Hermione in case something went wrong with her Horcrux?
But your point about the horcrux likely not restoring magic lost through killing dementors seems a good one. I’d consider that likely. But if she could get her magic restored, that would open up a lot of ritual magic to her.
Yes, it is a bit suspicious—but then Azkaban and Dementors are so terrible that it’s worth the risk, IMHO.
And I don’t think Harry is counting just on the Horcrux, I think he’s counting on Horcrux as last failback, counting on the unicorn blood and the “she knows death can be defeated because she did went back from death”, and maybe even Hermione calling a Phoenix.
I agree that it’s worth the risk, but apparently Harry doesn’t.
’”I thought...” Hermione said. She sounded uncertain. “I thought for sure that after this, you and Professor McGonagall wouldn’t… you know… let me do anything the least bit dangerous ever again.”
‘Harry said nothing, feeling guilty about the false relationship credit he was getting. It was in fact the case that Hermione was modeling him with tremendous accuracy, and that if not for Hermione having a horcrux, the surface of the planet Venus would have dropped to fractional-Kelvin temperatures before Harry tried this.’
I agree with you that unicorn blood is more likely to be significant than the Horcrux in this scenario, and until this last chapter was posted I expected HARRY to think the same way, which is why his thinking stuck out to me as memorably optimistic.
The chapter 122 in itself was good, I liked it, but I feel a bit disappointed that it’s the end of the whole hpmor.
Not to be unfairly critical, it’s still a very great story and many thanks to Eliezer for writing it, but… there are way too many remaining unanswered questions, unfinished business, … to be the complete end. It feels more like “end of season 1, see season 2 for the next” than “and now it’s over”.
First, I would really have liked a “something to protect” about Harry’s parents.
But mostly, there are lots of unanswered questions : how does magic work ? What destroyed Atlantis ? Where do the Deadly Hallows and the Stone come from ? What is the thing threatening to destroy the world ? What exactly are the effects of all the transformations on Hermione ?
And many plots arcs not finished : will Hermione managed to destroy the dementors, and with which consequences ? How will the political landscape reshape, but in UK and worldwide ? How will Harry manage to find a safe way to save the muggles too ? How will Hogwarts evolved ? How will Harry manage the Elder Wand ?
You see, now EY provokes you into writing some rationalist HPMOR fanfiction before he publishes the epilogue.
Isn’t it a little out of character for Harry to blithely assume that Hermione can’t possibly die in her dementor mission? He doesn’t even know how Horcrux 2.0 works—is there any good reason to think that the Horcrux will preserve your life if you deliberately fuel your magic with your life to kill dementors? (It’s basically just a body-hopping spell, not a life-preservation spell.) Would a horcrux restore to Harry the life and magic he used to revive Hermione?
It just seems suspiciously out of character that Harry has now suddenly turned into an optimist with regard to Hermione’s survival. He even says to himself he would never let her risk the mission if he thought it was actually dangerous, which means that he apparently actually fully buys into her immortality.
It will be tragic for Harry if she is dead again, for real, next week. Not because death is tragic per se, but because it will utterly blindside him.
Presumably they would test Hermione out on a single dementor first. Harry made that point about Voldemort testing horcruxes, so presumably he would do that as well. Also, didn’t Voldemort write down the directions for resurrecting Hermione in case something went wrong with her Horcrux?
But your point about the horcrux likely not restoring magic lost through killing dementors seems a good one. I’d consider that likely. But if she could get her magic restored, that would open up a lot of ritual magic to her.
Yes, it is a bit suspicious—but then Azkaban and Dementors are so terrible that it’s worth the risk, IMHO.
And I don’t think Harry is counting just on the Horcrux, I think he’s counting on Horcrux as last failback, counting on the unicorn blood and the “she knows death can be defeated because she did went back from death”, and maybe even Hermione calling a Phoenix.
I agree that it’s worth the risk, but apparently Harry doesn’t.
’”I thought...” Hermione said. She sounded uncertain. “I thought for sure that after this, you and Professor McGonagall wouldn’t… you know… let me do anything the least bit dangerous ever again.”
‘Harry said nothing, feeling guilty about the false relationship credit he was getting. It was in fact the case that Hermione was modeling him with tremendous accuracy, and that if not for Hermione having a horcrux, the surface of the planet Venus would have dropped to fractional-Kelvin temperatures before Harry tried this.’
I agree with you that unicorn blood is more likely to be significant than the Horcrux in this scenario, and until this last chapter was posted I expected HARRY to think the same way, which is why his thinking stuck out to me as memorably optimistic.