I read the rewrites before I read the corresponding section of the post and, without knowing the context, I find Richard’s first rewrite to be the most intuitive permutation of the three.
I fully expect that this will stop once I read the post, but I thought that my particular perspective of having read the rewrites first might be relevant.
I read the rewrites before I read the corresponding section of the post and, without knowing the context, I find Richard’s first rewrite to be the most intuitive permutation of the three. I fully expect that this will stop once I read the post, but I thought that my particular perspective of having read the rewrites first might be relevant.