One point you don’t address: While you justify the claim that intelligence is real thing and can be compared, you don’t explain why it would be measurable in a numerical scale. In particular, I don’t see what “linear increase in intelligence” and “exponential increase in intelligence” mean and how they can be compared.
Stylistically, I agree with many of the other comments and I think this paper is unsuitable for academic publication. You should keep out discussion of side issues like speculation on the bottlenecks in academic research, how MIRI plans to deal with the potential intelligence explosion, and general discussions on how to reason, and focus just on the arguments for the existence and on the nature of an intelligence explosion.
One point you don’t address: While you justify the claim that intelligence is real thing and can be compared, you don’t explain why it would be measurable in a numerical scale. In particular, I don’t see what “linear increase in intelligence” and “exponential increase in intelligence” mean and how they can be compared.
Stylistically, I agree with many of the other comments and I think this paper is unsuitable for academic publication. You should keep out discussion of side issues like speculation on the bottlenecks in academic research, how MIRI plans to deal with the potential intelligence explosion, and general discussions on how to reason, and focus just on the arguments for the existence and on the nature of an intelligence explosion.