No no, my point was that I didn’t know what this was referring to. An arcane book of their secrets passed down from Nightmare Moon’s banishment? The secret society itself? The particular mare leaving (were all of them given names like ‘Moon’s X’?)? A particular responsibility she was in charge of? A suborganization of the society (sounds like black ops or intelligence gathering)? etc.
(I didn’t even notice that ‘hand’ is inappropriate in a MLP fic. I wonder if anyone has written a lint checker for human anatomical words for use in MLP fics.)
No no, my point was that I didn’t know what this was referring to.
Understood; I think that the confusion was at least in part because I had screwed up the terminology in other parts of the chapter. I went through several names for this particular group and its members, and apparently some old names snuck into the version that I uploaded; now that everything’s correct, I think it’s clearer. Is it?
No no, my point was that I didn’t know what this was referring to. An arcane book of their secrets passed down from Nightmare Moon’s banishment? The secret society itself? The particular mare leaving (were all of them given names like ‘Moon’s X’?)? A particular responsibility she was in charge of? A suborganization of the society (sounds like black ops or intelligence gathering)? etc.
(I didn’t even notice that ‘hand’ is inappropriate in a MLP fic. I wonder if anyone has written a
lintchecker for human anatomical words for use in MLP fics.)Understood; I think that the confusion was at least in part because I had screwed up the terminology in other parts of the chapter. I went through several names for this particular group and its members, and apparently some old names snuck into the version that I uploaded; now that everything’s correct, I think it’s clearer. Is it?
I wouldn’t know, now that I’ve already read it before.