This was weird. I am clearly not the target audience, but I guess the more options the better.
My impression is that, relative to the presentation format, the text is simply too complicated. If you optimize for people with short attention span, you should probably also make the sentences and paragraphs shorter. Maybe more repetition, or saying the same thing several different ways.
I wonder if you asked people at the end what it was about, if they could actually make a coherent answer, or just say something like “something about rationality… and Caesar… and why you should eat vegetables”.
This was weird. I am clearly not the target audience, but I guess the more options the better.
My impression is that, relative to the presentation format, the text is simply too complicated. If you optimize for people with short attention span, you should probably also make the sentences and paragraphs shorter. Maybe more repetition, or saying the same thing several different ways.
I wonder if you asked people at the end what it was about, if they could actually make a coherent answer, or just say something like “something about rationality… and Caesar… and why you should eat vegetables”.