(I’m confused about who “his” refers to in the first paragraph—I predict 90% redman and 9% me)
edit: figured it out on third reread. the first paragraph responds to me, the second paragraph responds to redman.
(I’m confused about who “his” refers to in the first paragraph—I predict 90% redman and 9% me)
edit: figured it out on third reread. the first paragraph responds to me, the second paragraph responds to redman.