Since the author seems to have been discouraged at one point:
The good: The images (the blobs) are really good. Cute, quirky, engaging, in some cases good explainers. Overall the production value seems high.
The confusing: I’m not familiar with manga, e.g. its idioms or vibes; so there’s probably stuff you were going for that I just wouldn’t understand.
The probably bad: I’m guessing that the writing has too many leaps that are too unclear. I could imagine this being a style, like in a fictional work where things are sort of referenced without really being explained but referenced in a way that makes them “feel real” to the reader (and maybe makes them go look it up). But I’d guess the comic doesn’t hit that as-is. Possibly the comic would benefit from test readers (preferably from your target audience) who you talk with to see where they got bored / confused.
Since the author seems to have been discouraged at one point:
The good: The images (the blobs) are really good. Cute, quirky, engaging, in some cases good explainers. Overall the production value seems high.
The confusing: I’m not familiar with manga, e.g. its idioms or vibes; so there’s probably stuff you were going for that I just wouldn’t understand.
The probably bad: I’m guessing that the writing has too many leaps that are too unclear. I could imagine this being a style, like in a fictional work where things are sort of referenced without really being explained but referenced in a way that makes them “feel real” to the reader (and maybe makes them go look it up). But I’d guess the comic doesn’t hit that as-is. Possibly the comic would benefit from test readers (preferably from your target audience) who you talk with to see where they got bored / confused.