Oh. So these communities, and Key’s life, are extremely atypical of that world’s humanity as a whole. That’s something worth stating because the story doesn’t even hint at it.
I disagree: it doesn’t matter for the story whether the communities are typical or atypical for humanity as a whole, so mentioning it is unnecessary.
I disagree: it doesn’t matter for the story whether the communities are typical or atypical for humanity as a whole, so mentioning it is unnecessary.