I concur re. the second paragraph “quote” thingy. I kind of expected to see a footnote—it was written as if out of another work and I wasn’t sure to make of it. Maybe clarify that it’s your own prose or preface it with some kind other kind of intro?
I concur re. the second paragraph “quote” thingy. I kind of expected to see a footnote—it was written as if out of another work and I wasn’t sure to make of it. Maybe clarify that it’s your own prose or preface it with some kind other kind of intro?