This post has the fewest upvotes of any post in the sequence by a long way, so I’m interested in revising it based on feedback. It’d be useful to hear what people disliked about it, or improvements you’d suggest.
I enjoyed it, and think that ideas are important, but found it hard to follow at points
Some suggestions:
explain more why self criticism allows one part to assert control
give more examples throughout, especially the second half. I think some paragraphs don’t have examples and are harder to understand
flesh out examples to make them longer and more detailed
This post has the fewest upvotes of any post in the sequence by a long way, so I’m interested in revising it based on feedback. It’d be useful to hear what people disliked about it, or improvements you’d suggest.
I enjoyed it, and think that ideas are important, but found it hard to follow at points
Some suggestions:
explain more why self criticism allows one part to assert control
give more examples throughout, especially the second half. I think some paragraphs don’t have examples and are harder to understand
flesh out examples to make them longer and more detailed