This post has the fewest upvotes of any post in the sequence by a long way, so I’m interested in revising it based on feedback. It’d be useful to hear what people disliked about it, or improvements you’d suggest.
I enjoyed it, and think that ideas are important, but found it hard to follow at points
Some suggestions:
explain more why self criticism allows one part to assert control
give more examples throughout, especially the second half. I think some paragraphs don’t have examples and are harder to understand
flesh out examples to make them longer and more detailed
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This post has the fewest upvotes of any post in the sequence by a long way, so I’m interested in revising it based on feedback. It’d be useful to hear what people disliked about it, or improvements you’d suggest.
I enjoyed it, and think that ideas are important, but found it hard to follow at points
Some suggestions:
explain more why self criticism allows one part to assert control
give more examples throughout, especially the second half. I think some paragraphs don’t have examples and are harder to understand
flesh out examples to make them longer and more detailed