Thank you for that feedback, I appreciate it and find it useful. Given the feedback in the comments, I now feel pretty strongly that the way I wrote that poker section was a mistake. I’m really happy that I learned this lesson though.
Yeah that also makes sense about leading with the example that is most likely to be engaging to readers. Here I feel like that’d probably be the programming example actually, but maybe not since basketball is simple enough to make sense to anyone.
I also agree with the introductory sentence being a good idea. I think I just overlooked that, actually.
Thank you for that feedback, I appreciate it and find it useful. Given the feedback in the comments, I now feel pretty strongly that the way I wrote that poker section was a mistake. I’m really happy that I learned this lesson though.
Yeah that also makes sense about leading with the example that is most likely to be engaging to readers. Here I feel like that’d probably be the programming example actually, but maybe not since basketball is simple enough to make sense to anyone.
I also agree with the introductory sentence being a good idea. I think I just overlooked that, actually.