This is excellent.
I’m not sure your summaries of the nutrition and dietary issues are completely representative (in particular, my impression is that the situation for fat is substantially more complicated than you describe it) but this is overall very good.
Suggest moving from Discussion to Main.
This is excellent.
I’m not sure your summaries of the nutrition and dietary issues are completely representative (in particular, my impression is that the situation for fat is substantially more complicated than you describe it) but this is overall very good.
Suggest moving from Discussion to Main.