I couldn’t imagine a such detailed description of every flaw my piece of writing has. I have two questions to ask you:
First: How do you take the time to comment to someone who just started on LessWrong, how do you manage to write nearly 800 words to give feedback to someone you don’t know and to someone to tell him you didn’t appreciate his work? I am sincerely and honestly in awe in front of what you are doing.
Second: I don’t know when I’ll publish my next post, (it’ll be a bit shorter I think), but when I’ll publish it, can you please be here to comment and give me things I can work on? Thank you very much; I really want to become better at this special art.
(Note: Being referred to as “master” makes me feel uncomfortable and I’d expect it to make most people feel similarly uncomfortable.)
First: How do you take the time to comment to someone who just started on LessWrong, how do you manage to write nearly 800 words to give feedback to someone you don’t know and to someone to tell him you didn’t appreciate his work? I am sincerely and honestly in awe in front of what you are doing.
You seem well intentioned and eager to learn, so I wanted to help. It also ended up only taking 10-20 minutes or so, so not too bad.
Second: I don’t know when I’ll publish my next post, (it’ll be a bit shorter I think), but when I’ll publish it, can you please be here to comment and give me things I can work on? Thank you very much; I really want to become better at this special art.
I don’t think your writing is ready for LessWrong. Instead, I’d recommend an online community like Scribophile that is more targeted at beginner-level writers.
Thank you very much, dear master.
I couldn’t imagine a such detailed description of every flaw my piece of writing has. I have two questions to ask you:
First: How do you take the time to comment to someone who just started on LessWrong, how do you manage to write nearly 800 words to give feedback to someone you don’t know and to someone to tell him you didn’t appreciate his work? I am sincerely and honestly in awe in front of what you are doing.
Second: I don’t know when I’ll publish my next post, (it’ll be a bit shorter I think), but when I’ll publish it, can you please be here to comment and give me things I can work on? Thank you very much; I really want to become better at this special art.
Thank you, master.
Hope you have an amazing day.
You’re very welcome.
(Note: Being referred to as “master” makes me feel uncomfortable and I’d expect it to make most people feel similarly uncomfortable.)
You seem well intentioned and eager to learn, so I wanted to help. It also ended up only taking 10-20 minutes or so, so not too bad.
I don’t think your writing is ready for LessWrong. Instead, I’d recommend an online community like Scribophile that is more targeted at beginner-level writers.