If I came across this story in a magazine, I wouldn’t read beyond the first paragraph, except out of curiosity as to whether it was all so dreadful. (It is.) Like the dog walking on its hind legs, the wonder is not that it is done well, but that it is done at all.
BTW, you have two Chapter 6′s, 8′s, and 9′s, which seem to be multiple responses by GPT4 to the same prompt. Was this intentional?
If I came across this story in a magazine, I wouldn’t read beyond the first paragraph, except out of curiosity as to whether it was all so dreadful. (It is.)
We’ll soon see many such tests. I suspect that even the GPT4 of today will fool many seasoned readers.
Personally, I’ve enjoyed the novella. Not the best I’ve ever read, but I wanted to learn what comes next, which is a high bar these days.
BTW, you have two Chapter 6′s, 8′s, and 9′s, which seem to be multiple versions of ChatGPT’s responses to the same prompt. Was this intentional?
Yep, posted the entire conversation as it was. In several instances, I asked it to rewrite a plot twist I didn’t like, etc.
Personally, I’ve enjoyed the novella. Not the best I’ve ever read, but I wanted to learn what comes next, which is a high bar these days.
The beginning isn’t as interesting as it could be. It’s not as “hook-y” as most books I find in the library are. But by, say, Chapter 10, I was interested in reading it.
If I came across this story in a magazine, I wouldn’t read beyond the first paragraph, except out of curiosity as to whether it was all so dreadful. (It is.) Like the dog walking on its hind legs, the wonder is not that it is done well, but that it is done at all.
BTW, you have two Chapter 6′s, 8′s, and 9′s, which seem to be multiple responses by GPT4 to the same prompt. Was this intentional?
We’ll soon see many such tests. I suspect that even the GPT4 of today will fool many seasoned readers.
Personally, I’ve enjoyed the novella. Not the best I’ve ever read, but I wanted to learn what comes next, which is a high bar these days.
Yep, posted the entire conversation as it was. In several instances, I asked it to rewrite a plot twist I didn’t like, etc.
The beginning isn’t as interesting as it could be. It’s not as “hook-y” as most books I find in the library are. But by, say, Chapter 10, I was interested in reading it.
(I can’t believe I’m criticizing AI work. Wow.)