I wonder if it would have been as frustrating if he had instead opened with “The following are very loosely based on real conversations I’ve had, with many of the details changed or omitted.” That’s something many writers do and get away with, for the very reason that sometimes you want to show that someone actually thinks what you’re claiming people think, but you don’t actually want to be adversarial to the people involved. Maybe it’s not the fairest to the specific arguments, but the alternative could quite possibly turn out worse, or cause a fairly large derail from the main point of the essay, when you start focusing on the individual details of each argument instead of whatever primary pattern you’re trying to tie them together with.
I wonder if it would have been as frustrating if he had instead opened with “The following are very loosely based on real conversations I’ve had, with many of the details changed or omitted.” That’s something many writers do and get away with, for the very reason that sometimes you want to show that someone actually thinks what you’re claiming people think, but you don’t actually want to be adversarial to the people involved. Maybe it’s not the fairest to the specific arguments, but the alternative could quite possibly turn out worse, or cause a fairly large derail from the main point of the essay, when you start focusing on the individual details of each argument instead of whatever primary pattern you’re trying to tie them together with.