It feels unfinished. Like you were starting to say something, then got distracted in the middle of the history of US communists and hit publish. It sounds like there might eventually be an interesting point, here, but right now it sounds like page 1 of a 5 page essay.
I’ll take that as constructive criticism. Lately my time is very fragmented and scarce but I’ve been frustrated by a strong desire to express certain insights that I think/hope I have.
It feels unfinished. Like you were starting to say something, then got distracted in the middle of the history of US communists and hit publish. It sounds like there might eventually be an interesting point, here, but right now it sounds like page 1 of a 5 page essay.
I’ll take that as constructive criticism. Lately my time is very fragmented and scarce but I’ve been frustrated by a strong desire to express certain insights that I think/hope I have.