Possible typo: ”… three fifth-years. The fifty-hears...”
Possible phrase left over from a previous edit: “Luna shook it.”
Thanks. Fixed the first typo. Clarified the other bit.
There is a “going going” in this chapter as well
Fixed. Thanks.
And around the paragraph where Fay is poking fourth years:
“Luna watched through the window.
...
Luna placed her hand over Fay’s wand-hand.”
It seems like Luna stayed outside, peering in through the window. Then in inside to put her hand over the wand hand.
Whoops. Fixed. Thanks.
Also this feels a bit jumbled: “It made not difference to just say you believed in a double-magic school.”
And there’s an instance of “She rubber her head” that should probably be “rubbed”.
They were typos too. Fixed. Thanks.
Possible typo: ”… three fifth-years. The fifty-hears...”
Possible phrase left over from a previous edit: “Luna shook it.”
Thanks. Fixed the first typo. Clarified the other bit.
There is a “going going” in this chapter as well
Fixed. Thanks.
And around the paragraph where Fay is poking fourth years:
“Luna watched through the window.
...
Luna placed her hand over Fay’s wand-hand.”
It seems like Luna stayed outside, peering in through the window. Then in inside to put her hand over the wand hand.
Whoops. Fixed. Thanks.
Also this feels a bit jumbled: “It made not difference to just say you believed in a double-magic school.”
And there’s an instance of “She rubber her head” that should probably be “rubbed”.
They were typos too. Fixed. Thanks.