I wanted to love this post, but stylistic issues got in the way.
It read too much like a gwern essay: certainly interesting, but in need of a summary and a guide for how it is practically applicable. A string of highlights and commentary with no clear underlying organization and conclusion is not optimally useful.
That being said, I appreciate you taking the time to create this post, as well as your call for constructive criticism.
I wanted to love this post, but stylistic issues got in the way.
It read too much like a gwern essay: certainly interesting, but in need of a summary and a guide for how it is practically applicable. A string of highlights and commentary with no clear underlying organization and conclusion is not optimally useful.
That being said, I appreciate you taking the time to create this post, as well as your call for constructive criticism.