Interesting. You might want to revise the description a couple chapters in, once the story has its own identity, but the character seems like someone who might be entertaining to follow.
(As with Harry Potter, I’m coming in with zero knowledge of the base material—Twilight bored me no less quickly than Philosopher’s Stone.)
Interesting. You might want to revise the description a couple chapters in, once the story has its own identity, but the character seems like someone who might be entertaining to follow.
(As with Harry Potter, I’m coming in with zero knowledge of the base material—Twilight bored me no less quickly than Philosopher’s Stone.)