I made Luminosity its own website. Also, chapter seven exists now. If you prefer e-mail updates over RSS, fanfiction.net will continue to update with new chapters, and it is still the correct place to put reviews, but for other purposes I believe my site will be better.
I don’t mind the color scheme, but here’s a tool called Readability that tries to reformat websites to be more readable. (Among other things, it uses [nearly] black text on a [nearly] white background.)
In chapter 5, Alice and Bella don’t come into direct skin-skin contact—they both have on long sleeves, and Alice hauls on Bella’s arm, not her hand.
Typo fixed—thanks :) (Note that I’m fixing typos on Luminosity’s own website only, not on FF.net due to interface hate. This one was a current typo, but if you’re spotting them on FF.net instead of the Luminosity site, they may already have been caught.)
The link works for me. I’m not sure what might be wrong with it. I will fix the typo, but FF.net takes for-freaking-ever to push adjustments to content. Here are the chapters extant on my own webspace, where they should behave. (I will continue to update on FF.net too in order to attract the attention of more conventional fic readers.)
Moar.
Yet moar.
Chapter six on ff.net; on my webspace (navigation and prettyfulness coming soon).
I made Luminosity its own website. Also, chapter seven exists now. If you prefer e-mail updates over RSS, fanfiction.net will continue to update with new chapters, and it is still the correct place to put reviews, but for other purposes I believe my site will be better.
Could we please not have white text on a black background?
I don’t mind the color scheme, but here’s a tool called Readability that tries to reformat websites to be more readable. (Among other things, it uses [nearly] black text on a [nearly] white background.)
This works great. Thanks for the link!
You could always disable the CSS.
In ch7 Bella determined that Alice’s skin feels like rock, but she didn’t notice that in ch5. Was she just too distracted or something?
In chapter 5, Alice and Bella don’t come into direct skin-skin contact—they both have on long sleeves, and Alice hauls on Bella’s arm, not her hand.
Typo fixed—thanks :) (Note that I’m fixing typos on Luminosity’s own website only, not on FF.net due to interface hate. This one was a current typo, but if you’re spotting them on FF.net instead of the Luminosity site, they may already have been caught.)
This link is dead right now. (I also got emailed it by the fanfiction.net subscription thingy.)
Chapter 3 typo alert: “disintersting” --> “disinteresting”.
The link works for me. I’m not sure what might be wrong with it. I will fix the typo, but FF.net takes for-freaking-ever to push adjustments to content. Here are the chapters extant on my own webspace, where they should behave. (I will continue to update on FF.net too in order to attract the attention of more conventional fic readers.)
Works for me now too!