The new version was like a shock-glove-plated punch to the gut right at “I thought it was to my death I went”. Wouldn’t trade anything for that feeling. :)
Greater emotional impact in much fewer words. It actually feels awful, rather than sounding like a drawn-out rationalization. New version wins on both counts IMHO.
The new version was like a shock-glove-plated punch to the gut right at “I thought it was to my death I went”. Wouldn’t trade anything for that feeling. :)
Greater emotional impact in much fewer words. It actually feels awful, rather than sounding like a drawn-out rationalization. New version wins on both counts IMHO.