I think the swear words made a reasonably large difference for me, and editing them out would have improved my reading experience a good bit.
(To be specific: “pussy” is clearly a swear word for me, “sex” is not. This line also irked me: “”I say grow that shit like a jungle, give ’em something strong to hold onto, let it fly in the open wind”)
I think the swear words made a reasonably large difference for me, and editing them out would have improved my reading experience a good bit.
(To be specific: “pussy” is clearly a swear word for me, “sex” is not. This line also irked me: “”I say grow that shit like a jungle, give ’em something strong to hold onto, let it fly in the open wind”)