I agree with this comment strongly enough that I’m unsatisified with merely upvoting it. I think the lecturer was making a valid point extremely poorly, and the above rewording is a great improvement. If you agree with the lecturer, arguing about word choice is probably a waste of time. If you don’t, then frame your disagreement as if it were with the above paraphrase, because that’s how it will seem to the lecturer, who (I expect) intended to convey something very like it.
I agree with this comment strongly enough that I’m unsatisified with merely upvoting it. I think the lecturer was making a valid point extremely poorly, and the above rewording is a great improvement. If you agree with the lecturer, arguing about word choice is probably a waste of time. If you don’t, then frame your disagreement as if it were with the above paraphrase, because that’s how it will seem to the lecturer, who (I expect) intended to convey something very like it.