neither does “subjects view known outcomes as far more inevitable”;
Be concrete!
e.g. “Later, they were asked to recall what their predictions were. The subjects, on average, remembered a higher confidence in their past prediction that Bush would win, compared to what had reported before the election.”
Again—be concrete. By and large, avoid any dangling references to “previous results”, or even previous sections of the same article.
“results from previous studies” doesn’t fix it;
neither does “subjects view known outcomes as far more inevitable”;
Be concrete!
e.g. “Later, they were asked to recall what their predictions were. The subjects, on average, remembered a higher confidence in their past prediction that Bush would win, compared to what had reported before the election.”
Again—be concrete. By and large, avoid any dangling references to “previous results”, or even previous sections of the same article.