Thanks. I’ll dwell more on these. Quick thoughts from a first read:
I generally liked the “further discussion” doc.
I do think it’s important to strongly signal the aspects of cause neutrality that you do intend to pursue (as well as pursuing them). These are unusual and important.
I found the mission statement generally opaque and extremely jargony. I think I could follow what you were saying, but in some cases this required a bit of work and in some cases I felt like it was perhaps only because I’d had conversations with you. (The FAQ at the top was relatively clear, but an odd thing to lead with.)
I was bemused by the fact that there didn’t appear to be a clear mission statement highlighted anywhere on the page!
ETA: Added some more in depth comments on the relevant comment threads: here on “further thoughts”, and here and here on the mission statement.
Thanks. I’ll dwell more on these. Quick thoughts from a first read:
I generally liked the “further discussion” doc.
I do think it’s important to strongly signal the aspects of cause neutrality that you do intend to pursue (as well as pursuing them). These are unusual and important.
I found the mission statement generally opaque and extremely jargony. I think I could follow what you were saying, but in some cases this required a bit of work and in some cases I felt like it was perhaps only because I’d had conversations with you. (The FAQ at the top was relatively clear, but an odd thing to lead with.)
I was bemused by the fact that there didn’t appear to be a clear mission statement highlighted anywhere on the page!
ETA: Added some more in depth comments on the relevant comment threads: here on “further thoughts”, and here and here on the mission statement.