I’d write the conclusion a bit differently : “So thank you to all the people who pick laptops from the top of a spreadsheet and use legible metrics of laptop picking to keep manufacturers honest so I can just go to the computer store nearest to me, buy whatever they advise me, and still end up with something pretty good.
I’d write the conclusion a bit differently : “So thank you to all the people who pick laptops from the top of a spreadsheet and use legible metrics of laptop picking to keep manufacturers honest so I can just go to the computer store nearest to me, buy whatever they advise me, and still end up with something pretty good.
i’m pretty sure I’m the one free-riding here.