We could of followed it better that way but there is still no reasoning in those steps. The right way to structure this discussion is to start with the problems you want to solve (and why they’re problems) and then explain how to solve them. This outline still has nothing motivating it. What people need to see is what you think needs explaining and how you theory explains it best. Its true that the math might be acceptable enough but no one really wants to spend their time doing math to solve problems they don’t think are problems or for explaining the behavior of things they don’t think exist.
It is as if someone showed up with all this great math that they said described God. Math is fun and all but we’d want to know why you think there is a God that these equations describe!
We could of followed it better that way but there is still no reasoning in those steps. The right way to structure this discussion is to start with the problems you want to solve (and why they’re problems) and then explain how to solve them. This outline still has nothing motivating it. What people need to see is what you think needs explaining and how you theory explains it best. Its true that the math might be acceptable enough but no one really wants to spend their time doing math to solve problems they don’t think are problems or for explaining the behavior of things they don’t think exist.
It is as if someone showed up with all this great math that they said described God. Math is fun and all but we’d want to know why you think there is a God that these equations describe!