If Hermione takes down Azkaban and survives, and does so without Harry seeming to take control, that would be more amazing to read than I can possibly express.
It would also reflect terribly on Hermione. She’d be an utter fool to attempt that kind of thing without using Harry’s brilliance and resourcefulness. Her influence over Harry is one of her most useful powers and killing stuff ingeniously (and surviving) is pretty much Harry’s specialty. It isn’t hers.
It’s one thing to insist on having your own team in a school battle-games. It’s quite another to waste the opportunity to accept aid (and in this case even leadership) from an ally in a situation that means the life and death of yourself and others. It’d be disgustingly immature, take ‘silliness’ to a whole new level and be completely irrational. Unless Hermione’s goal in attacking Azkaban really is more about her ego and signalling and not about the need for Azkaban to be attacked for some direct reason… and she had some reason to be completely confident that it wouldn’t kill her.
Yes, to make it plausible you do have to put Hermione in an impatient or infuriated state of mind, and Harry has to be out of contact. So, for example, suppose:
Harry is elsewhere, preparing his next move against Voldemort; and
Hermione gets dragged to Azkaban on a visit by someone intending to intimidate her, and she concludes it is just as monstrous as Harry thinks. (Actually, she’d probably be even less tolerant: Hermione is not a lesser-evil-excusing sort of person, once you jolt her out of her status-quo bias.)
You could argue that would be enough—Hermione is good at hard work and righteous indignation, and she and Harry could be arranged by the author to have discussed hypothetical Azkaban strategies beforehand. If you wanted added pressure on Hermione,
someone threatens her with death or, indeed, imprisonment within Azkaban.
In which case Hermione might rationally decide to “go out with a bang.”
The hardest part of this (in a literary sense) would be keeping Harry away from Hermione for the critical period.
But Hermione isn’t really rational, she’s just intelligent. I don’t think she can perform a feat of astounding rationality in this fic, as you are suggesting. Her idea of morality is flawed and naive. If I imagine her going to Azkaban and destroying it, it would be for decidedly uninspiring reasons to me, as a rationalist.
I am confused. What would you suggest as an example of an “inspiring reason” to go and destroy Azkaban, that does occur or could occur to Harry, that would not normally occur to Hermione?
But I’d disagree that it would reflect terribly on Hermione. It wouldn’t be optimal, but few people behave optimally. Lily’s futile attempt to save Harry was suboptimal, but I don’t think it reflected terribly on her.
Unfortunately, Hermoine’s particularly suboptimality is exactly this—trying to prove that she is as effective and powerful as Harry, and so not wanting Harry’s help. She should know better. And she does, in a sense, and better than Harry or Draco. She was the general who got her army to help do the planning for the battle. She could accept their help, and sought it out. But her Prodigy Superiority Complex is threatened by help from Harry.
This whole scenario is taking a grim turn in my mind. Hermione may sacrifice herself to destroy the dementors, only to have Harry see that the sacrifice was unnecessary, and could have been avoided if he updated the note he gave to her on dementors.
It wouldn’t necessarily reflect badly on her: if someone has to die to take down Azkaban,* and Harry needs to survive to achieve other important goals, then Hermione taking it down seems like a non-foolish solution to me.
*This is hinted at as being at least a strong possibility.
It would also reflect terribly on Hermione. She’d be an utter fool to attempt that kind of thing without using Harry’s brilliance and resourcefulness. Her influence over Harry is one of her most useful powers and killing stuff ingeniously (and surviving) is pretty much Harry’s specialty. It isn’t hers.
It’s one thing to insist on having your own team in a school battle-games. It’s quite another to waste the opportunity to accept aid (and in this case even leadership) from an ally in a situation that means the life and death of yourself and others. It’d be disgustingly immature, take ‘silliness’ to a whole new level and be completely irrational. Unless Hermione’s goal in attacking Azkaban really is more about her ego and signalling and not about the need for Azkaban to be attacked for some direct reason… and she had some reason to be completely confident that it wouldn’t kill her.
No respect points for ego when it is at the expense of shut up and multiply.
Yes, to make it plausible you do have to put Hermione in an impatient or infuriated state of mind, and Harry has to be out of contact. So, for example, suppose:
Harry is elsewhere, preparing his next move against Voldemort; and
Hermione gets dragged to Azkaban on a visit by someone intending to intimidate her, and she concludes it is just as monstrous as Harry thinks. (Actually, she’d probably be even less tolerant: Hermione is not a lesser-evil-excusing sort of person, once you jolt her out of her status-quo bias.)
You could argue that would be enough—Hermione is good at hard work and righteous indignation, and she and Harry could be arranged by the author to have discussed hypothetical Azkaban strategies beforehand. If you wanted added pressure on Hermione,
someone threatens her with death or, indeed, imprisonment within Azkaban.
In which case Hermione might rationally decide to “go out with a bang.”
The hardest part of this (in a literary sense) would be keeping Harry away from Hermione for the critical period.
But Hermione isn’t really rational, she’s just intelligent. I don’t think she can perform a feat of astounding rationality in this fic, as you are suggesting. Her idea of morality is flawed and naive. If I imagine her going to Azkaban and destroying it, it would be for decidedly uninspiring reasons to me, as a rationalist.
I am confused. What would you suggest as an example of an “inspiring reason” to go and destroy Azkaban, that does occur or could occur to Harry, that would not normally occur to Hermione?
I go into more detail in the post below, but I only picture Hermione attacking the dementors under some kind of time pressure with Harry unavailable.
http://lesswrong.com/lw/g1q/harry_potter_and_the_methods_of_rationality/8441
But I’d disagree that it would reflect terribly on Hermione. It wouldn’t be optimal, but few people behave optimally. Lily’s futile attempt to save Harry was suboptimal, but I don’t think it reflected terribly on her.
Unfortunately, Hermoine’s particularly suboptimality is exactly this—trying to prove that she is as effective and powerful as Harry, and so not wanting Harry’s help. She should know better. And she does, in a sense, and better than Harry or Draco. She was the general who got her army to help do the planning for the battle. She could accept their help, and sought it out. But her Prodigy Superiority Complex is threatened by help from Harry.
This whole scenario is taking a grim turn in my mind. Hermione may sacrifice herself to destroy the dementors, only to have Harry see that the sacrifice was unnecessary, and could have been avoided if he updated the note he gave to her on dementors.
It wouldn’t necessarily reflect badly on her: if someone has to die to take down Azkaban,* and Harry needs to survive to achieve other important goals, then Hermione taking it down seems like a non-foolish solution to me.
*This is hinted at as being at least a strong possibility.