I was merely explaining why I missed the part you quoted, to give you some feedback as an author. I also largely agree with the top comment. Due to very limited time I tend to skim or skip meandering/​bloviating text. I think this article would benefit from sections, TLDR, and summary.
Point taken re: formatting. But what you consider meandering, to me, is laying contextual groundwork to build the conclusion on. I cannot control for impatience.
I was merely explaining why I missed the part you quoted, to give you some feedback as an author. I also largely agree with the top comment. Due to very limited time I tend to skim or skip meandering/​bloviating text. I think this article would benefit from sections, TLDR, and summary.
Point taken re: formatting. But what you consider meandering, to me, is laying contextual groundwork to build the conclusion on. I cannot control for impatience.