Thanks. I fixed many of the listed mistakes this spring. Some of that sudden improvement sprang from reading your glowfic early this year, so thank you for that as well. This was the passage where I realized how much low-hanging fruit was piled up in my own mental workspace, this was the passage where I started taking serious notes (early, minor Mad Investor Chaos spoilers):
His thoughts don’t move in the frequent circles and loops that any telepath would be familiar with, of mostly going over the same points and occasionally diverting from them in a new direction. Any time Keltham thinks the same thought twice, or at most three times, he undergoes a reflexive wordless motion and focuses there and starts thinking words about why the thoughts are not-quiescent after having already been spoken.
Thanks. I fixed many of the listed mistakes this spring. Some of that sudden improvement sprang from reading your glowfic early this year, so thank you for that as well. This was the passage where I realized how much low-hanging fruit was piled up in my own mental workspace, this was the passage where I started taking serious notes (early, minor Mad Investor Chaos spoilers):
His thoughts don’t move in the frequent circles and loops that any telepath would be familiar with, of mostly going over the same points and occasionally diverting from them in a new direction. Any time Keltham thinks the same thought twice, or at most three times, he undergoes a reflexive wordless motion and focuses there and starts thinking words about why the thoughts are not-quiescent after having already been spoken.
That passage has stuck with me too.