Good point. It also makes Celestia look like a much more credible character. One of my biggest problems was “Why the hell hasn’t Celestia come up with this solution a thousand years ago?” and by making it genuinely really difficult to make the mass alicornification work properly, I can come up with a plausible answer for this that isn’t “Celestia isn’t rational.”.
For what it’s worth, I think I’m going to keep the particular thing you quoted, because I think it makes significantly more logical sense for alicorns, which are supposed to emulate the strengths of all three races, to be able to do everything than to lose the ability to do certain things. But I’ll probably change the power level of alicorns to be more dangerous, as to me that makes just as much sense as my own interpretation of their power, and ought to be an equally challenging obstacle to the protagonists as the loss of talents would be.
I was thinking along the lines of “Jack of all trades, master of none”.
It’s not that they’d lose their abilities, it’s that they’d lose precision. They might regain what they had and more, given a thousand years to work on it, but they’d lose out now.
Fortunately, I now have enough arguments against alicornification to turn the fanfic into a good fight while still having the world the way I originally envisioned it. I doubt many people are going to say I’m making it too easy, what with all the arguments about social pressure, overpopulation, and potential for magical abuse. Plus, I’m adding something that we don’t see often enough: At the beginning of the fic, the protagonist is simply WRONG. Twilight’s belief is “We should charge ahead and turn everypony into alicorns as quickly as possible” and to me, that’s actually very stupid. My own belief is that the best way forward involves care and caution, making sure things will work on a societal level before taking significant steps forward, and that’s the belief Twilight will eventually take on.
(I know that it’s a big warning sign to have my protagonist have the same beliefs as me, but I can’t avoid it, since I want Twilight to be rational enough to eventually reach the right conclusion, and I obviously think my belief is correct, or else I’d believe something else. So, hopefully this helps with that problem.)
But thanks very much for your initial point, it definitely made me think much harder about the world, and how I wanted it to work. I likely would have taken your advice on if I hadn’t received so many good arguments. In fact, I was originally going to give other ponies Celestia-like powers to counter this author bias until I was soundly defeated in a debate about alicornification with that prior, which therefore made me decide “Okay, it’s not being too easy on myself to make alicorn magic a force multiplier, it’s being too hard on myself to make every alicorn Celestia!”
Good point. It also makes Celestia look like a much more credible character. One of my biggest problems was “Why the hell hasn’t Celestia come up with this solution a thousand years ago?” and by making it genuinely really difficult to make the mass alicornification work properly, I can come up with a plausible answer for this that isn’t “Celestia isn’t rational.”.
For what it’s worth, I think I’m going to keep the particular thing you quoted, because I think it makes significantly more logical sense for alicorns, which are supposed to emulate the strengths of all three races, to be able to do everything than to lose the ability to do certain things. But I’ll probably change the power level of alicorns to be more dangerous, as to me that makes just as much sense as my own interpretation of their power, and ought to be an equally challenging obstacle to the protagonists as the loss of talents would be.
I was thinking along the lines of “Jack of all trades, master of none”.
It’s not that they’d lose their abilities, it’s that they’d lose precision. They might regain what they had and more, given a thousand years to work on it, but they’d lose out now.
Fair enough. I know close to nothing about how the different flavors of ponies work.
Fortunately, I now have enough arguments against alicornification to turn the fanfic into a good fight while still having the world the way I originally envisioned it. I doubt many people are going to say I’m making it too easy, what with all the arguments about social pressure, overpopulation, and potential for magical abuse. Plus, I’m adding something that we don’t see often enough: At the beginning of the fic, the protagonist is simply WRONG. Twilight’s belief is “We should charge ahead and turn everypony into alicorns as quickly as possible” and to me, that’s actually very stupid. My own belief is that the best way forward involves care and caution, making sure things will work on a societal level before taking significant steps forward, and that’s the belief Twilight will eventually take on.
(I know that it’s a big warning sign to have my protagonist have the same beliefs as me, but I can’t avoid it, since I want Twilight to be rational enough to eventually reach the right conclusion, and I obviously think my belief is correct, or else I’d believe something else. So, hopefully this helps with that problem.)
But thanks very much for your initial point, it definitely made me think much harder about the world, and how I wanted it to work. I likely would have taken your advice on if I hadn’t received so many good arguments. In fact, I was originally going to give other ponies Celestia-like powers to counter this author bias until I was soundly defeated in a debate about alicornification with that prior, which therefore made me decide “Okay, it’s not being too easy on myself to make alicorn magic a force multiplier, it’s being too hard on myself to make every alicorn Celestia!”