Let me add to the chorus of “you rock!” This is a nice piece of work. I don’t know how you got the chance to present to a group of young people about this stuff, but kudos also to whoever gave you that opportunity.
Some have pointed out potential improvements. This seems like a solid way for anyone interested to add a quantum of effort to the cause—improve the presentation a bit, and post your improved version somewhere. (Where?)
Let me add to the chorus of “you rock!” This is a nice piece of work. I don’t know how you got the chance to present to a group of young people about this stuff, but kudos also to whoever gave you that opportunity.
Some have pointed out potential improvements. This seems like a solid way for anyone interested to add a quantum of effort to the cause—improve the presentation a bit, and post your improved version somewhere. (Where?)