There’s room for improvement, but this is just a rant. It’s useless for the project of improvement, because he’s attacking anything he can find a clever turn of phrase for, rather than the things that especially deserve attack.
It’s not even useful to see where the PR failure is, because once something set him off, everything suddenly became a PR failure. Look for insight in saner places than this, please.
There’s room for improvement, but this is just a rant. It’s useless for the project of improvement, because he’s attacking anything he can find a clever turn of phrase for, rather than the things that especially deserve attack.
It’s not even useful to see where the PR failure is, because once something set him off, everything suddenly became a PR failure. Look for insight in saner places than this, please.