Thanks, this all helps. At the time, I felt that writing this with the meta-disclosures you’re describing would’ve been a tactical error. But I’ll think on this more; I appreciate the input, it lands better this time.
I did write both “I know former members who feel severely harmed” and “I don’t want to become known as someone saying things this organization might find unflattering”. But those are both very, very understated, and purposefully de-emphasized.
Thanks, this all helps. At the time, I felt that writing this with the meta-disclosures you’re describing would’ve been a tactical error. But I’ll think on this more; I appreciate the input, it lands better this time.
I did write both “I know former members who feel severely harmed” and “I don’t want to become known as someone saying things this organization might find unflattering”. But those are both very, very understated, and purposefully de-emphasized.