“solder” appears twice in text—it should be “soldier”
What is “Vi didn’t wait for her translator.” supposed to mean? I’m a bit confused because of earlier “She left her cornea and other electronics with Miriam on the scout ship.”. Is it supposed to hint at Vi having non-electronical ‘machines’ (such as the translator) in her body, or just a statement about her having to override her natural instinct/reflex (=normally she’d just wait for the translation, but this time she had a plan to lay down in advance which she would executed even if she still had the electronic translator)? Do people in far future really need to wait for translator?
Hello, very intriguing story!
“solder” appears twice in text—it should be “soldier”
What is “Vi didn’t wait for her translator.” supposed to mean? I’m a bit confused because of earlier “She left her cornea and other electronics with Miriam on the scout ship.”. Is it supposed to hint at Vi having non-electronical ‘machines’ (such as the translator) in her body, or just a statement about her having to override her natural instinct/reflex (=normally she’d just wait for the translation, but this time she had a plan to lay down in advance which she would executed even if she still had the electronic translator)? Do people in far future really need to wait for translator?
Fixed the “solder”s.
“Vi didn’t wait for her translator” was a flat-out continuity error. Thanks for noticing. I have corrected the sentence.