I enjoyed it, and think that ideas are important, but found it hard to follow at points
Some suggestions:
explain more why self criticism allows one part to assert control
give more examples throughout, especially the second half. I think some paragraphs don’t have examples and are harder to understand
flesh out examples to make them longer and more detailed
I enjoyed it, and think that ideas are important, but found it hard to follow at points
Some suggestions:
explain more why self criticism allows one part to assert control
give more examples throughout, especially the second half. I think some paragraphs don’t have examples and are harder to understand
flesh out examples to make them longer and more detailed