I think this is doubly emphasized by the bit where Draco struggles to rephrase his thoughts without using “Harry words”, but given that the fic is meant as an evangelizing platform for rationality it makes me wonder whether there’s a good way to lessen the turnoff of such speech.
Ideally we’d have Hermione and Draco speaking the same ideas in a more colloquial fashion, but that would seem forced in all of the ways I can imagine it being done.
I think this is doubly emphasized by the bit where Draco struggles to rephrase his thoughts without using “Harry words”, but given that the fic is meant as an evangelizing platform for rationality it makes me wonder whether there’s a good way to lessen the turnoff of such speech.
Ideally we’d have Hermione and Draco speaking the same ideas in a more colloquial fashion, but that would seem forced in all of the ways I can imagine it being done.