Not that it matters, but the new version sounds kind of like the author is making a big deal, and the old version sounds like normal press language, to me at least
Yeah, I agree, but press language is rare enough that I think you get false-positives on LW. Agree that in a normal news articles list it would be parseable and reasonable.
Not that it matters, but the new version sounds kind of like the author is making a big deal, and the old version sounds like normal press language, to me at least
Yeah, I agree, but press language is rare enough that I think you get false-positives on LW. Agree that in a normal news articles list it would be parseable and reasonable.