Read a little more—the geologist inside me screaming “wrong,wrong, wrong” at every turn. Doesnt invite the suspension of disbelief necessary to enjoy scifi.
I find it more enjoyable to pretend that it’s the first novella of my young son. He will improve, and will surpass myself. But the first work must be full of shortcomings, no way around it.
It’s more interesting to focus on what GPT4 got right, as its successes better represent its future potential than its failings of the young age.
But what it gets wrong is also interesting. It has an incoherent model of the world (which is probably what you would expect) and that messes with the writing.
Read a little more—the geologist inside me screaming “wrong,wrong, wrong” at every turn. Doesnt invite the suspension of disbelief necessary to enjoy scifi.
I find it more enjoyable to pretend that it’s the first novella of my young son. He will improve, and will surpass myself. But the first work must be full of shortcomings, no way around it.
It’s more interesting to focus on what GPT4 got right, as its successes better represent its future potential than its failings of the young age.
But what it gets wrong is also interesting. It has an incoherent model of the world (which is probably what you would expect) and that messes with the writing.