Yeah, calling people insane is not a good start. Using language that most of your audience won’t understand is also a problem. The bigger problem, though, is that you don’t seem to be saying anything useful to me even when I put some effort into understanding the jargon—you just make claims without providing explanations.
By explanation I don’t mean I want you to explain what your claim means (” I’m referring to...”). I mean I want you to explain why you believe your claim. Jargon is of secondary importance—it just takes a few google searches to understand. Also, I don’t really care what seems weird to you. I do find it interesting why something seems weird to you, as long as you make some sort of sense :D
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Yeah, calling people insane is not a good start. Using language that most of your audience won’t understand is also a problem. The bigger problem, though, is that you don’t seem to be saying anything useful to me even when I put some effort into understanding the jargon—you just make claims without providing explanations.
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By explanation I don’t mean I want you to explain what your claim means (” I’m referring to...”). I mean I want you to explain why you believe your claim. Jargon is of secondary importance—it just takes a few google searches to understand. Also, I don’t really care what seems weird to you. I do find it interesting why something seems weird to you, as long as you make some sort of sense :D
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