When you cricitize Spock’s “rationality”, I think it would be better to visually separate the beliefs you disagree with, otherwise an inattentive reader might get confused about what exactly are you trying to say. Like this:
“You can expect everyone to react in a reasonable, or what Spock would call rational, way.” This expectation is irrational because…
“You should never make a decision until you have all the information.” This requirement is irrational because…
“You should never rely on intuition.” This is irrational because…
“You should not become emotional.” This is irrational because...
When you cricitize Spock’s “rationality”, I think it would be better to visually separate the beliefs you disagree with, otherwise an inattentive reader might get confused about what exactly are you trying to say. Like this:
“You can expect everyone to react in a reasonable, or what Spock would call rational, way.” This expectation is irrational because…
“You should never make a decision until you have all the information.” This requirement is irrational because…
“You should never rely on intuition.” This is irrational because…
“You should not become emotional.” This is irrational because...
Thanks for the suggestion. I underlined the points. Hopefully that helps.